Valentiny Contest Entry: A Paper Heart Mystery
Below is my entry for Susanna Leonard Hill's Valentiny Writing Contest, a contest where writers must write a children's story in 214 words or less. This year's theme is "curiosity" so I wrote a mystery!
A Paper Heart Mystery
214 words
Cora woke up and discovered a red paper heart by her pillow. “What a special Valentine’s Day surprise!” When she got dressed, she found another heart in the closet. When she brushed her teeth, she found another on the bathmat.
Mama came into the room, little Neo panting at her feet. “Thank you, Cora, for the lovely paper hearts you left me in my room,” she said.
“But I thought you were the one who put them in my room.”
“That is very curious,” Mama said.
Cora thought for a moment. “Do you think a leprechaun left them?”
“Leprechauns are for St. Patrick’s Day,” said Mama.
“What about the Easter Bunny?” Cora asked.
“Easter is not for weeks.”
“Santa?”
Mama chuckled. “I don’t know who left them. Let’s get ready for school.”
At breakfast, Cora found a heart under the table. She found another inside her shoe, then one more under her coat.
Cora grabbed Neo’s leash and whistled. “Neo! Time to walk to school.”
Neo trotted in with a mouthful of paper hearts. He dropped them at Cora’s feet, wagging his tail. “Neo! You silly pup. It was you that left the hearts everywhere.” She bent and Neo licked her face. “I love you too. Thank you for the special Valentine’s Day surprise.”
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Photo above adapted from photo by Adonyi Gábor from Pexels.
I love the picture in the end as well as all the questions Cora asked about who might have left them. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun story! I love the mystery, and what an adorable ending. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteNice dialogue between Mama and Cora. Good luck!
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So kid-like to think that the Easter Bunny or Santa left them! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteSo cute!
ReplyDeleteOf course it was the dog! Love it. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I was curious to know who was leaving the hearts, nice surprise ending.
ReplyDeleteCute! My pup is looking at me with guilty eyes because I'm asking why he didn't get me paper hearts:)
ReplyDeleteSweet and suspenseful. Nothing like puppy love. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteLOL, our dog would have left all those hearts a shredded mess. I'm glad Neo (as the delivery vehicle) left them intact! Sweet puppy love.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet story. Our little dog would have chewed up all those hearts, she already chewed up some of the chocolate kisses. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet story, Lara! Love that the puppy was the one sharing love! Good job making us wonder :) Thanks for joining in the Valentiny fun!
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